timevirus vs. Marcus Aurelius {timevirus wins}

[timevirus]

Rules

Lines - 10
Due - today, ASAP

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Biting = DQ
FEEDING = DQ

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[Marcus Aurelius]

seen.

[timevirus]

fuck TV & time nameplays, ya name is false from the start
ya verses resemble Rome - dated structures falling apart
ur lost in the dark. peep the stats, don't even try steppin
call me Funkmaster Flex - i'm spinning ya record to a Hot 9-7
u been stretchin ya pussy lines like a masturbating chick
speakin of words, ya bars got more extras than a Gladiator flick
i murdered u once before. now ur back & wanting more?
that's cool, i'll turn ya exit wounds into revolving doors
ur just a drama whore, i'm a carnivore that'll tear u apart
i dropped a bomb on wackness.. it landed dead on the Marc

[Marcus Aurelius]

look who it is...
it's tv the text legend! cats peep him with blinders!
your sheer skill is impressive....to fashion designers.
& ur easy 2 predict. no nostradamus required.
roman nameplays, a marc line..
so it looks like I'm feed'n ur verse 2 the lions.
ur girl stays lie'n. <--that's just for ur know'n
her with me's a time issue,
when I'm read'n her articles of clothing.
don't talk tuff or get crushed with volleyball technique.
peeps'll think of ufc unleashed when I spike tv.
so lay low. learn this sooner be4 u think 2 get bolder.
don't be txt's sam bradford,
...1 shoulder injury from ur career being over.

[Sinic]

this isnt a biast vote or a hate vote because marc has voted against me in any way but i honestly think that time won this just cause he was more funny and wasnt trying to be over creative, but at the same time was original.

my vote = timevirus

[Mike Wrecka]

fuck TV & time nameplays, ya name is false from the start
ya verses resemble Rome - dated structures falling apart
u been stretchin ya pussy lines like a masturbating chick
speakin of words, ya bars got more extras than a Gladiator flick
i murdered u once before. now ur back & wanting more?
that's cool, i'll turn ya exit wounds into revolving doors


vs.


look who it is...
it's tv the text legend! cats peep him with blinders!
your sheer skill is impressive....to fashion designers.
don't talk tuff or get crushed with volleyball technique.
peeps'll think of ufc unleashed when I spike tv.




cool battle. timevirus must have keyed this up quick. well below his norm. some good stuff in that verse. but some ehh stuff. the hot 97 line was a miss. and the nameplay hit the marc ive seen done on him a bunch of times. the stuff i quoted was dope to cool.

marcs verse started off real strong. im gonna say that sheer skill was LOTB. shit was dope. i read that and was like uh oh tv may have underestimated. but then it pretty much fell flat for me. the read'n her articles of clothing only makes sense one way. good concept just didnt work it out all the way through. the spike tv was ok. ya i know tv lines are extremely played against virus. but this one was ok in my book.

aight good battle. props.

vote - tv

[timevirus]

thanks for the feedback yall

2-0 uppin

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[Richard Corey]

timevirus
ur lost in the dark. peep the stats, don't even try steppin
call me Funkmaster Flex - i'm spinning ya record to a Hot 9-7
u been stretchin ya pussy lines like a masturbating chick
speakin of words, ya bars got more extras than a Gladiator flick
i murdered u once before. now ur back & wanting more?
that's cool, i'll turn ya exit wounds into revolving doors


Marcus Aurelius
ur girl stays lie'n. <--that's just for ur know'n
her with me's a time issue,
when I'm read'n her articles of clothing.
don't talk tuff or get crushed with volleyball technique.
peeps'll think of ufc unleashed when I spike tv.


Marc's verse was okay. Some interesting stuff, the "spike tv" line being my favorite. But tv's verse was just more hard hitting throughout. Actually, the only lines of his I didn't like were the opener and closer.


V/tv

[timevirus]

thanks for droppin in RC

3-0 uppin

[CSick]

aight.. this was pretty easy.. time virus had a decent verse. not his best but i doubt he went all out. he had a few good punchs. good structure. wordplay and flow. marcus u did ur thing. but sometimes i cant find the flow in your writtens.. it might be the way u structure your verse but sometimes i find myself looking for the rhyme and its not there. anyway u had an alright verse but it wasnt as hard hitting as tv's.

vote - timevirus

[timevirus]

4-0

thanks for the feedback everyone

uppin to get this shit finished

vote time virus

he had more punches and better flow, i liked that gladiator part too

[timevirus]

5-0

good game marcus

[lyricalreaper]

time took this one... that was too nice

[lyricalreaper]

i liked this man but time took it

[VerbalAssault]

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